Tuesday, September 18, 2012


PREPARATION OUTLINE

NAME: Justin Mahoney  

TITLE OF SPEECH: Keeping My World Running

Introduction
  I.        Attention Catcher: Did you know there was a time when people didn't need computers? 

 II.       Listener Relevance Link:  I'm sure most of you are just like me.

III.       Speaker Credibility: I use my laptop, A LOT

IV.       Thesis Statement: I would be lost without my laptop.

 V.       Preview: Let's take a look at what my laptop means to me.

Transition (optional):


Body
  I.        First Main Point: I use my laptop for EVERYTHING!
            A.  Subpoint: The things my laptop does for me
                  1.  Sub-Subpoint: School
                  2.  Sub-Subpoint: Entertainment
                  3.  Sub-Subpoint: Social Media
Transition: The most important thing I use my laptop for is school work

II.        Second Main Point: School
            A.  Subpoint: Take Notes
                  1.  Sub-Subpoint: Who wants to carry so many notebooks
                  2.  Sub-Subpoint: Save paper, save the world
            B.  Subpoint: Write Papers
                  1.  Sub-Subpoint: Every writing assignment requires it
                  2.  Sub-Subpoint: Beauty of Spell/Grammar check
            C.  Subpoint: Internet Help
                  1. Sub-Subpoint: Google
                  2. Sub-Subpoint: Summaries and Explanations
Transition: When I'm not doing school work I'm probably still using it for fun.


III.       Third Main Point: Entertainment

            A.  Subpoint: Music
                  1.  Sub-Subpoint: I listen to music all day on my laptop
                  2.  Sub-Subpoint: Great for studying
            B.  Subpoint: Movies
                  1.  Sub-Subpoint: Why buy them when you can download?
                  2.  Sub-Subpoint: Nice to have them at the ready
            C.  Subpoint: Games
                  1.  Sub-Subpoint: Online games keep me busy between classes
                  2.  Sub-Subpoint: When there's no homework to be done, games are a nice alternative
Transition: My laptop allows me to stay connected with friends and family.

IV.      Fourth Main Point: Social Media

          A. Subpoint: Facebook
                1.  Sub-Subpoint: Chat it up with friends at other schools

                2.  Sub-Subpoint: Clubs with Facebook groups makes it easy to stay updated

          B. Subpoint: Twitter
                1.  Sub-Subpoint: Better than Facebook

          C. Subpoint: Other Time Wasters

                 1. Sub-Subpoint: Stumbleupon

                 2. Sub-Subpoint: Youtube

Transition: My computer basically runs my life

Conclusion
  I.        Restatement of Thesis: I would be lost without my laptop
 II.       Summary of Main Points: My laptop keeps me ahead of school, keeps me entertained, and keeps me connected
III.       Clincher: My laptop is always there, keeping my world running.


1 comment:

  1. Dude, like, it was all good and stuff. I like laptops too. I think you're cool

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